TOEFL iBT Writing: “Why are people living longer now?”

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www.bettertoeflscores.com Michael Buckhoff, founder of the 7 Step System to Pass the TOEFL iBT, reads, evaluates, and scores an essay written by one of his TOEFL iBT students. Hi Michael, I am submitting my second essay.I timed it and wrote.It took exact 30 minutes.But I didn’t get time to revise.But I am thrilled to know my score. Tell me the score as in ToefliBT. In general people are living longer now. Discuss the cause of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay. It is sure that people are living longer now. There are advantage and disadvantage because of this. I feel the main factor is, people are more aware about the health issues. Medias are giving good publicity about the importants of being healthy, and what all precautions are needed to maintain healthy life. Being healthy is good for the person, good for the country, and good for the society. Among all these, I feel the most important factors which helps people to live longer are advance in medical technology, Easy access to hospital, and more knowledge in people First of all the advance in medical technology made a drastic change in human life. We are able to diagnose a disease earlier and in addition able to treat it. For instance, now in USA those who are having a insurance policy can have a free medical check up every year. If the doctor feel any doubt about breast cancer for the patient, immediately he recommend the patient the do a mammography. This advance in technology …

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Hi Michael,

Today, I received my TOEFL score. My overall score is 100/120. The break up is as follows:

Reading: 22/30

Listening: 25/30

Speaking: 26/30

Writing : 27/30

I want to thank you for helping me. I liked your STEALTH series. I liked your passion about teaching and you want everyone to succeed. I did not have much time to prepare. I was nervous but after watching your lectures, I was confident that I would do fine.

In the end, I want to tell you that you should be proud of yourself that what an incredible teacher you are. I am also a teacher but I teach Microsurgery which is little bit different from English and I commend the efforts you put in your students(including me) with continuous guidance through your newsletters and videos.
Please feel free to contact me for any questions and correct this letter.
Take care,
Syed Gillani, MD

Michael,

I can say that it’s very important to organize your time efficiently to reach your target score.
my first toefl was 72 and after 3 months I was able to score 84.
Therefore I think it’s important to have strategy in your study, by the way I want to thank you Mr Michael your tips were very helpful to me especially in speaking section because I scored 23.

mohamed

Hi Michael,

I receieved my scores at TOEFL. My overall score is 106/120. The break up is as follows:

Reading: 26/30

Listening: 26/30

Speaking: 26/30

Writing : 28/30
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