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www.bettertoeflscores.com Michael Buckhoff, founder of Better TOEFL Scores, reads, evaluates, and scores an essay from one of his online TOEFL iBT students. Hi Michale, Can you please check my essey. Thanks. Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. This essay aims to outline if physical exercise should be required part of every school day or students should spend the whole day on academic studies. In order to show this, I will call upon examples from my own private life in order to support my thesis. My opinion is that exercise should be required part of every school day, because exercise is important part of everybody life. If one wants to be healthy, physical and mentally, she or he must exercise every day. From my own experience I had better results in school when I used to have physical exercise. First, one of world’s number one problem in past few years is overweight. This leads to cardiovascular diseases, lots of mental diseases and big problems with self-esteem. Young people have lots of problems during the day in the school. Private problems, difficult subjects, tests, etc. and if they don’t have physical exercise during the day, they will not release all that stress. Some students will try to find comfort in food, some in drugs and other in …
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