TOEFL Essay Evaluation: “Should Students Be Required to Attend Classes?”

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www.bettertoeflscores.com Hi, Nadeem, this is Michael Buckhoff of Better TOEFL Scores. I have scored your TOEFL iBT independent essay task according to the ETS rubrics that TOEFL iBT human raters will use to score your essay. This is what you wrote hello sir this is my new assay Some people believe that university student should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific detail and examples in your answer. To be educated is important for all people to support their family and compete with the society for better life. Some people might think that university classes should be optional because compulsory classes are wastage of time and rather un-necessary. I believe that university classes should be compulsory for all students because classes provide guidance and motivation. A compulsory class provides guidance to all students, so they are ready for hard work in future. Teachers in the university are very well equipped, trained and having degree related to respective subjects so, they can’t be substitute by books. Their guidance constitutes a key factor in success. They got high salaries from the Universities because they are highly qualified and, if we will not attend classes we cannot understand subject vey well. We have to go for tuition privately by paying separate fees, may be vary from 500 to 1000$ per months. For example, if I will not attend the English class …

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Hi Michael,

Today, I received my TOEFL score. My overall score is 100/120. The break up is as follows:

Reading: 22/30

Listening: 25/30

Speaking: 26/30

Writing : 27/30

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I can say that it’s very important to organize your time efficiently to reach your target score.
my first toefl was 72 and after 3 months I was able to score 84.
Therefore I think it’s important to have strategy in your study, by the way I want to thank you Mr Michael your tips were very helpful to me especially in speaking section because I scored 23.

mohamed

Hi Michael,

I receieved my scores at TOEFL. My overall score is 106/120. The break up is as follows:

Reading: 26/30

Listening: 26/30

Speaking: 26/30

Writing : 28/30
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