TOEFL iBT Writing: “Discuss an event in your life, with specific details.”

Michael Buckhoff’s “7 Step System to Pass the TOEFL iBT

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http;//www.bettertoeflscores.com Michael Buckhoff, founder of Better TOEFL Scores, reads, evaluates, and scores a revised essay written by one of his online TOEFL iBT students. thanks for your suggestions. I have written the essay again based on your comments. please evaluate it. thanks sunitha Sometimes an event that seems to be going badly turns out well after all. Discuss an event in your life, with specific details. An event can be wedding, baby shower, delivery or any health issue. By approaching with patience and confidence, the event can turn good even it seems to turn bad by chance. The event in my life is my baby shower of baby boy. It is always memorable and enjoyable event in my life. First, I struggled to conceive a baby, although my husband and I were fit and healthy. We were planning for the baby more than 5 years. For the first two years, we waited hopefully that something will come up by chance or luck, but all in vain. In the meantime, my mother in law passed away and it added up to our sadness and grief. We then decided to try artificial insemination which was expensive and painful. We underwent the treatment for 3 times and ended up in failure. We lost hope and quit the treatment and eventually I got pregnant. Second, my baby shower which was in my dreams happened in my life. I and my husband organized a traditional baby shower at home. We invited our friends in the community, relatives and neighbors for the function. The function started early in the

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